(enchant: ?page, (background: black) + (text-colour: white))
<div style="text-align: center; margin-top: 15vh;">
<!-- The Title with a subtle creepy blur effect -->
<h1 style="font-size: 5rem; letter-spacing: 12px; margin-bottom: 5vh; text-transform: uppercase; color: #800000; text-shadow: 0 0 10px rgba(128,0,0,0.6);">(text-style: "fidget")[''Beach'']</h1>
<hr style="width: 20%; border: 0; border-top: 1px solid #333; margin-bottom: 8vh;">
<!-- The Menu Options with built-in Harlowe rumble styling -->
<div style="font-size: 1.5rem; line-height: 3rem;">
(text-style: "rumble")+(text-colour:red)[[Enter]]
(text-style: "rumble")[[Credits]]
</div>
</div>*yawns*
[[Get out of bed]]*eats bread*
[[Leave the house]]*walks to workplace*
[[Continue]]*arrives*
[[Open Door]]*2 hours later at the counter*
[[Cont]]*A man arrives, he is pointing at the apple*
[[Give him the apple]]*The man gives the cash*
[[Store into the Drawer]]*It is now almost time to go home*
[[Pack up and leave]]*During my walk i see a poster*
[[Interact]]*A New Vacation Home to rent for 2 weeks*
[[Next]]*Walks back Home*
[[continue]]2 Weeks Later..
*Walks 2km into the forest*.
[[Leave The Forest]]
Ahh, its the beach house, this is where the fun will begin, time to enter
[[Enter House]]
So this is the lounge, now maybe i should look around
[[Kitchen]] [[Upstairs]] [[Basement]]Nice, we got an oven, a fridge and a chopping board
[[Enter House]][[Finish Tour and Enter Bedroom]] [[Enter House]]Looking good, i could use this as my spare room
[[Enter House]]Well looks like ive seen everything, its getting dark out there time to sleep
[[sleep]]3 hours later
*wakes up, looks like i cannot sleep*
[[Go Downstairs]][[Look into Telescope]] now how do i use this
[[Zoom 200mm]] [[Zoom Out 10mm]]
The beach by front of the house, rainy, dark
RA 14h 29m 42.1s | Dec -69° 48' 42"
The figure is staring at me in the beach
[[Blink]]I blink, and zoom , the figure is right in front of the telescope staring at me
RA 14h 29m 42.1s | Dec -60° 43' 48"
[[Done]]Back Window of house
RA 14h 29m 42.1s | Dec -62° 40' 46"
No this isnt it i need to zoom to where the paths are
Go back:
[[Look into Telescope]]The figure blocks the view, i attempt to escape but before i could react in time, the entity smahes the telescope glass into my face, shattering the lens into my eyesss/////......
*the entity knocks out the disortiented human and drags him down into an unknown place*
[[....]]
- Inside the house -
Im now inside the lounge
[[Sit on Sofa]][[Watch TV]]
Starting a movie called The Universe
[[Play Film]]* Titan, Outer Space*
An Astronaut is seen swimming to the planet Titan, looking to colonise it
[[Continuation]]He Plants the flag on top of titan surface and looks into the screen and smiles for 10 minutes..........
[[cont movie]].........................
[[Exit]]There is someone watching me through the window
[[Walk away and read a book]][[Read A Book]]This book is showing pictures of sheeps following the sheep
2 - The second picture is showing 2 humans following their boss, they are wearing the same clothes as each other
[[Page 2]]Picture 3 shows a male in colourful clothing smiling
Picture 4 shows a male wearing similar clothing as everyone else with straight face, everyone is walking past him......
[[Finish Book]]The person's face is pressing against the window staring at my soul
(text-style: "rumble")[[RUN OUTSIDE]]I run outside, i am lost but i dont see the figure anymore, i see a hill with a telescope maybe i can find the exit path
[[Run up a hill]]Official: A 26 yr old male Steven has been reported missing after weeks of not attending work he was last seen walking in the streets on his way back home, the police began an investigation to find his whereabouts, after 2 weeks the police department decided to rule it a suicide and closed the case.
[[next]](enchant: ?page, (background: #000044) + (text-colour: white))
*Inside Department*
Cop 1: I cant believe he would do that
Cop 2: Well it has nothing to do with us so i dont really care, we have more important stuff to solve, this case seems like a waste of taxpayer money
Cop 1: Yeah, its not our responsibility to look for someone who cant follow basic safety
[[The next scene]](enchant: ?page, (background: #000044) + (text-colour: white))
*Boss room, City Police Department 2pm*
Boss: So why should we hire you to take on the case
Jorge: Well firstly im a worldwide detective, every case i come across it always get solved, in fact i think im the master of cold cases, ive solved cases all around the world, you see the burning house case, i solved that, and it went cold for 40 years before that, ive solved 199 cases with a high sucess rate over 23 years, if you entrust me with this case, i will be humbled
Boss: Well, i entrust you to solve this case, if you do you will be awarded 1/2 of 40 mil considering this is your final case before retirement, this would be split into shares depending who contributed the most, well the ball is in your court to deliver this on time, i will assign you and a junior detective for you to train......
[[Next Scene]]*3 weeks of searching, the 2 detectives, a junior named Patrick led by Senior Jorge, pins down the location of the Beach House and begin an investigation, they are approaching the house*
*At the house*
Jorge: Well this is it, it doesn't look as scary as i thought it would look, it looks like a modern apartment you see in a city district, well no time no waste lets go and investigate it then
Patrick: Yeah this is gonna be interesting ill go search the lower floors
Jorge: Right and ill search the Upper Floors
[[Cont Scene]]
*Inside the bedroom*
Jorge: Ok we have 3 items a paper, a book and the wardrobe
[[Paper]] [[Wardrobe]] [[Book]]*An Empty Paper*
You find packs of clothing inside
[[Finish]] Back --> [[Cont Scene]]*I read a book named Man in the woods, you are now feeling terrified*
Back ---> [[Cont Scene]]*Inside The Kitchen*
Patrick: I found the body of steven, he is headless, his head is a few inches away from his body, there is lot of blood, i think its time we call the boss
[[YES]] [[NO]]3 hours later the cops arrive
Boss: Great job boys, as expected from you Jorge we finally solved this case so lets split the 40mil in half, you take 20, i take the latter, patrick for your hard work you will be given more cases to solve
Jorge: Well this is it, my 200th case solved, im gonna go home celebrate that milestone
Patrick: This was an easy case
Media: and there it is, the talented City Police Department have finally solved the case
FIN......
Jorge: No we shouldnt because if we do, they will get all the money and credit, no one deserves these rewards but us
Patrick: what are we gonna do with the body
Jorge: Were gonna place the body inside the freezer, then after 24 hours we take it out and sew his head and body back together when the blood is gone, then place him inside the closet, after that we will take it to the media and present it, and we will be remembered for being the ones who solved this famous case, think about it, we will be loved by everyone and seen as heroes
Patrick: Yeah thats right, we wouldnt wanna be forgotten, because theres no way the cops should take credit for this, they did nothing, but what about 40 mil should we split it?
[[Cont Scenes]]Jorge: I will take 39 million because im the one who lead this, and was the one who found the house and also im a senior and worldwide detective, you are only a newbie so you get 1 million
Patrick: Alright ill take it i dont mind after all im only doing this because its my hobby and interest to look at cold cases
Jorge: thats what i thought, now lets get to work
[[Shove body inside freezer]]The 2 men, pull and shove stevens body and head inside the freezer and close it
Jorge: There that should do it, now we should probably look for more evidence, you search the remains of this house, im gonna go outside and look around
Patrick: Alright
[[Go Outside]]*Jorge walks up a hill and finds a telescope*
Jorge: Hmm i can see coordinates on the paper let me zoom in
[[Use Telescope]]Jorge: Woah you can see the entire view from here, actually whats the point of searching the place when i can do this instead
[[2 hours later]]*Jorge walks to the beach to double check for hints, he finds nothing*
Jorge: Well im gonna go see patrick to see what hes found
*I Climb onto a rock*
[[Boulder 1]] [[Boulder 2]] [[Boulder 3]]*slips*
This rock is not in a good structural foundation....
[[Boulder 2]]*Rock Collapses*
Maybe i should use another boulder
[[Boulder 3]]*here we go*
*I climb near the top after 5 minutes of exhuasting sweat, once i climb the final ledge ill be in front of the house*
[[Finish Climb]]*I take a peek*
*In the front window, i see a man staring at me, he is holding patrick's head with his 2 palms*
*My hands numb and i let go of the ledge*
*CRACK*
[[..]]1 Week Later
[[Continue Story]]*wakes up, tries to move*
Nurse: Dont overexert yourself you havent fully recovered, its a relief you're alive, 1 week ago, the cops found out about the area, when they arrived, the junior detective was unfortuantley found in a horrible state, they couldnt find the prepeartor, they then tried to look for you, but when they found you, your head was bleeding, lots of medics were sent, and found you had several broken leg bones, dislocated shoulder, deafness on one ear, it was horrible, seeing the most talented detective in this state but luckily you survived, well if you need us ring the bell but for now this is your new home
*nurse leaves*
[[Get up]]
*I can't let them do this to me, this is pure evil, i know they are teaming up to contain my potential, ill find them and hunt them down once i extract steven from the freezer, i have to escape or i wont SUCCEED*
*I force myself to get out of bed, i move with a severe hunched position and obtain 2 crutches to use so i can move, i leave the premises and walk towards a parked van*
*I hijack the van and begin driving back towards the house*
[[Drive]]4 hours later
*Im now back in the area, this is gonna be a long painful walk but the body should be frozen, all i need to do is glue the head in place*
*I walk inside the house, towards the freezer, i drop my right clutch and force my hand to open that stiff handle*
*theres nothing inside*
*i look back*
*BLANK*
[[Wake up]](enchant: ?page, (background: #000044) + (text-colour: white))
Cops: This is the CPD hands where we can see them!
Unknown male: How did you know about this
Cops: We installed hidden cameras inside the house after seeing what happend to patrick, we knew there was someone doing this,
Cop 1: look its Steven's body in the corner of the room!
Unknown male: This is unexpected, well it looks like you made a big mistake
*the cops tasers and apprehends the suspect*
Boss: Good job boys now take the suspect away
[[Talk to Boss]](enchant: ?page, (background: #000044) + (text-colour: white))
Boss: Jorge long time no see, well you did a good job, you finally found the suspect
Jorge:.......
Boss: Well looks like i can invest that 40 million cash into our department and our boys who did a very good job in this raid, well ill see you around
*the boss leaves the room*
*Jorge attempts to reach for the air but succumbs to his wounds*
2 weeks later Jorge's body is found by the police after some searching the death is ruled a suicide
[[leave]]Fin
[[Main Title]] (text-colour:cyan)[''Creator - JOR6
Storywriter - JOR6
Concept - JOR6
Art - JOR6'']
[[Main Title]] (enchant: ?page, (background: #4a0000) + (text-colour: white))
House Basement 2am
I wake up with my arms and legs tied onto a board, i see a tall male he only has one eye on his neck and 2 noses on each side of his face
Unknown male: So you are the so called greatest detective of all time, well today im gonna end your legacy, no one will find steven, no one will solve this case, everything is coming to its end
Jorge: wwwwwwwww *I try hard to speak but the accident has severley slurred my speech*
[[gulp]]
(enchant: ?page, (background: #4a0000) + (text-colour: white))
Unknown male: this is it
(text-style:"rumble")[grabs a chainsaw]
Unknown male: It didnt have to come to this, you could have chose to investigate a different case before your retirement, well say goodbye
[(text-colour:red)+(text-style:"rumble")[Slashes chest]]
[(text-colour:red)+(text-style:"rumble")[Jorge: AHHHHHHHHHHH]]
[[Persevere]]