Oh geez! Okay, stay calm! There she is, resting by the waterfall.
Man she's so beautfull, why am I even here? There's no way in hell I'll be able to get her to notice me, let alone start a conversation.
This was a bad idea. Maybe if I quickly scoop up my stuff and head out she'll never notice I came. I can always make up a good excuse later.
[["Are you kiding me? Get over there and tell her you're here."->Page Two]]
[["Yeah, its probably for the best anyways, Sun's setting soon".->Page Two.2]]
"How's about we just play it cool and wait for her to notice us?" ->Page Two.3 (( WIP ))
Pfft! Are you kidding me right now?
You think I have the courage to go over there? And besides, what do I even talk about? I hardly ever go out and when I do its mostly just to check out the lastest Marval movie, getting groceries and driving to work.
Not exatly riveting converstation material.
[["Well, She did invite you. Just go over there and be yourself! :)"->Page 3]]
[["Hey! Civil War was actually pretty sweet though."->Page 3.2]]
Now we're talking! Thats the kind of response I like being selected!
[[Pack up and go home.->End]]
Oh yeah without a doubt! Captain America is a straight up thug! Did you see those fucking kicks?? Dude never skips leg day!
How crazy was that chase scene in the tunnel?! Or when Bucky had his freaking arm blown off! Black Panthar kicking ass! I honetly can't wait for BP's movie!
Oh! Please tell me you've seen the new Thor trailer? How fresh and crazy does that look?
[["Not only that, but have you checked out the next Spider-man trailer? Three words. Micheal-fucking-Keaton."->Page 4.3]]
[["Wait I think we're side tracking here. What happened to the waterfall?"->Page 4.4]]
you: "JusT gO oVRr ThErE AnD bE YoUrsElF."
Seriously? Thats the only "positive" option you could have selected back there?
Being myself is literally the main issue im trying to convey here. I've only got so few pages to use before this game becomes too strenuous to play so coul-
Oh shit, she's waving at me! No time to think! I have to respond now! What do I do?
[[Woah now, I only selected the option you gave me.->Page 4]]
[["Huh? Whats happening?"->Page 4.4]]
Whoops. Didnt get around to finishing this :)
Don't forget Donald Glover & Robey Jr! Tom Holland did pretty alright in his cameo in Civil War so I'm pretty keen on seeing how well he performs!
I'll always consider Toby the superior Spider-man though. Dude was born to be Peter Parker! Garfield not so much... maybe he was a good Spider-man but he defiently did not embody Peter like Toby did.
[["Wait. What happened to the story?"->Page 4.4]]
[["Yeah, I'm not really interested in reading this anymore."->End]]
Oh yeah, Ahem, let me get back on track.
So anyways, As I watch her lay there as the glistening water cascades behind her I...
Ehh, you know what? I cant do this anymore truth be told.
[["Wait, what? I was looking forward to how the story unfolds."->Page 5.3]]
[["Huh?, whats happening?"->Page 5.3]]
Sorry, but I kind of just lost steam. How do you put cascade in a sentence and not sound like a tawt at the same time?
I wrote a better story based on the words again if you'd like to take a look at that? I'm not goning to lie, it's pretty amazing.
So good that it would shatter all expectations and expose you to such perfection, that all former forms of enjoyment will leave you so hollow that you'll yearn for even a fraction of enjoyment this new story will bring you!
[["Well... can I atleast know how the waterall story ends?"-> Waterfall end]]
[["Yeah, nah. I've got other games to check out."->End]]
[["Fine, Lets here the new story."-> New Story]]
Thats it. :)
Just a short game intended to give someone a giggle. Made for a Game Jam
SPLIT: I tired to get the story to split into random tangents and have it so that each page would detach from the previous one.
Cascade: I wanted it so that as you go through each page you would be taken though this "cascade" of random tangents from the narrator.
Sunset: Uh.. This was made mostly at night?
[[Care to Replay?->Page One]]
Well, I was going to end it with the narrator having argued and second guessed himself for so long that the girl eventually left without the narrator ever realising. But in the end they realise that learning to trust and love themelves is more important... or something.
[["Eh, well at least I got my closure."->End]]
[["Oh, uhh, okay then. How about that new story then?" -> New Story]]
......
[["..."->...]]
Huh? Oh, uhh.. I didnt think you'd actually stick around.
Okay, uh, Just give me a second as I try to remember.
[[Alright I got it! Feast your eyes on this!->Page One]]