After 5 hours of driving you finally pull into the parkinglot of the Park with [[Susan]].
You get out of your car, then you get a sudden errie feeling...your unsure of yourself...
[[ignore the feeling]]
[[ask Susan if she has the same feeling]]
You shake the feeling off and proceed to take the camping backpacks out of the car.
[[take the bags out of the car and head twards the gift shop]]You ask her if she feels the same way, she says that she does but not to worry about it.
[[ GO BACK->get out of the car]] Susan is your girlfriend,
she looks happy.
[[get out of the car]]
Its a small giftstore with [[animal puppets]] [[nature books]] and [[iformation guids about the camp]],
there is a [[small older man]] behind the main desk.There is a veriety of small animal finger and hand puppets, they're cute.
[[GO BACK->giftshop]] There are National Geographic picture books.
[[open the book]]The information gide is filled with information about when the camp was built, the owner, and the popular animals in the site
its a perimative camp sight.
[[GO BACK->giftshop]]
The book filled with pictures of many animals and little information about them because National Geographic sucks.
[[giftshop]] You walk twards the man with Susan and tell him that you have reservations.
He looks at you in suprise
You wonder why.
He says "Sorry, its just that we haven't had alot of campers here lately because of... YOU KNOW WHAT WHATS YOUR NAME SON!?"
...that was odd
[[tell him your name]]
You look at the screen
You see that your name is the only name on the list.
He proceeds to repeat your name anyway...
"$protagonist...$protagonist...$protagonist"
"AAHA I FOUND IT!"
"your campsite is on the hill name Silent Creek"
He then looks at you nervously.
[[ask whats wrong]]You tell him your name is (set: $protagonist to (prompt: "What is your name?")) $protagonist
He scans through his computer on the desk repeatedly saying your name as if your name is lost in a sea of others.
[[sneak a peek at the screen]]He responds "NOTHING SON, NOTHING! THE QUESTION HERE IS WHATS WRONG WITH YOU!?"
He points at you awkwardly, his face is drenched in sweat, and he has a large uneasy smile plastered on his face.
[[chuckle]]
[[ask him again whats wrong]]you chuckle...
He brings down his finger and says "Sorry about that young man"
The thing that I've [[been so nervous about]] about...He says "sorry" and brings his finger down
His fece bushes deeply
"WELL THAT CAMPING AIN'T GONNA CAMP ITS SELF"
"GO ALONG NOW SHOO HAVE SOME FUN YOU TWO!" he says in a dadish tone
[[leave the building]]
...there was a death on that same trail a month ago, roumers got around that its haunted now, but I'm sure it's not true. Probebly just some rascals spreading that rumor trying to get some kids scared or somthin'"
he gives you a map.
[[exit the building]] You get out of the giftshop
You look back and see the old man wayving at you
You wave back and so does Susan
Susan says "That was sorta weird... but im sure that we will have a nice time if the ghost doesn't find us" then she chuckles and so do you.
[[take out the map]]
[[go with your gut]]You take out the map
You see [[Silent Creek]] on the map in bold letters all the [[other Trails]] have been crossed out on red pen but you can still see the names of each trail
Susan: "Hey, we shouldnt you get out the map so we know where we are going."
[[GO BACK->exit the building]]You leave the building
Susan-"that was strange (chuckles)"
[[look back]]
[[take out the map]]
[[ you dont need a map go with your gut]]you look back and see the old man wayving at you
you and Susan wave back
[[GO BACK->leave the building]]You go along with the trail that the map shows
Susan looks over your sholder to look at the map and points at the crossed out trails "OOH we should check those trails out
[[decline and say its dangerous]]
[[HECK YEAH WE TOTALLY SHOULD!]][[Oak Bridge]]
[[Shimmering Seaweed]]
[[Sunshine Bay]]You walk to Oak Bridge
Susan looks excited
There is police tape wrapped around the entrance of the trail
There is a sighn that says "DO NOT CROSS" infront of the entrance
Susan- "$protagonist, WE SHOULD TOTALLY CROSS IT"
[[CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]]
[[decline]]You walk to Shimmering Seaweed
Susan looks excited
There is police tape wrapped around the entrance of the trail
There is a sighn that says "DO NOT CROSS" infront of the entrance
Susan- "$protagonist, WE SHOULD TOTALLY CROSS IT"
[[CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]]
[[decline]]You walk to Sunshine Bay
Susan looks excited
There is police tape wrapped around the entrance of the trail
There is a sighn that says "DO NOT CROSS" infront of the entrance
Susan- "$protagonist, WE SHOULD TOTALLY CROSS IT"
[[CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]]
[[decline]]You say "No we shouldent, theres probebly a reason why it's crossed out"
Susan- "AWWWWW is $protagonist too chicken to see the SCARY TRAILS"
she then proceeds to make checken noises
[[decline again]]
[[other Trails]] you look at the map and choos one of the [[other Trails]] to exploreShe pokes your cheek "AWWW your no fun"
[[keep walking]]You continue to walk. Susan looks disapointed in you
you see [[your trail]]You and Susan put your camping bags down next to the entrence and proceed into the dark Trail surrounded by [[thick woods]] all around
as you keep walking you feel as if somethings watching you.
[[look around]]
[[check on Susan who is behind you]]
[[keep walking]]You say "No we shouldent, if theres Police tape theres DEFINATELY too dangerous to cross"
Susan- "AWWWWW is $protagonist too chicken to go into the SCARY TRAIL"
she then proceeds to make checken noises
[[decline again]]
[[CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]] You look deep into the wood but you bearly see past the first layer of trees. as you struggle to look beyond the trees the shadows get proggresivally darker by all the shadows. There is barely any light that has reached passed the leaves.
[[GO BACK->CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]] You look around and spot half of a what seems to be a face behind a huge old tree
when you try to focuse on the object more in the dim light you finally see that it is just a rock
but you could have sworn than you saw something...
[[take a closer look]]
[[GO BACK->CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]] You look behind yourself to only see the long trail that you have been walking on for what seems like ages. But you don't see Susan
You freak out a but but notice that she is clenched onto your arm. She looks freaked out
[[GO BACK->CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]]
[[ask if shes ok]]
[[keep going]]you [[walk]] twards the tree...
You ask Susan if shes ok
she says that she is but a little scared and slippes away from your arm
[[continue walking]]
You continue to walk caught up in your own mind
untill you hear Susan scream
[[run twards Susans scream]]
[[keep going and ignore the scream]] Something jumps out at you
you her Susan yell "$protagonist, N-"
You have died...
[[GO BACK->CROSS THE FRIGGEN' TAPE]] You get extremely worried and feel guilt and major regret. You run as fast as you can twards Susans destress calls, the screaming continues,
it stops suddenly and all is quiet. You feel as if your not alone. An eerie presence fills you with fear.
[[walk closer to where you heard the screams]]You ignore the scream and you'r all alone. Aperntly you dont care about your girlfriend and left her with nothing but death.
you hear something rustling behind you
[[run faster]]
[[look behind you]]
You have the urge to speed your pace. As you are speed walking you come across a camp site and hear laughter
[[walk twards the camp site]]You look behind yourself and see a hiddious faceless monster that only has a mouth. It is a pale gohstly white and has a stringy black maine. Its mouth is drenched in blood. It jumps out at you...
You have diedYou get closer to where there once was Susans screams that are now a memory.
A memory that will forever burn through your mind of her bloodcurtling screams that will never distance itself from your mind.
You get to her destress spot...
You see half of her carcass sitting in a pool of her own blood. Her arm has been ripped off along with her legs. The mustle of her body is exposed ,blood and mucus are oozing from the opening of her mouth. Her eyes still wet with tears and a distant stare as if they were still searching for you.
You look up and see the monstrous beast standing over her body. It has snake like eyes, horns, large sharp teeth with no lips,and a pinted skull. its body is hunched overand large hands with shap claws, and dog like legs with very large claws. Its teeth and hands are drenched in Susans blood. It is still feeding off of what it has stole from her body.
You are fild with rage and guilt. You feel as if your going to do somthing stupid.
[[run tword the beast]]
[[try to run away you need to find anyone you come across]]You run as fast as you can twards the faint light at the end of the thick woods. You see a figure of someone next to a tree.
[[run twards the figure]]You pass the sighn that has the trail map on it
You swore you saw claw marks slashed across the sighn coverd in some dry blood
but you convince yourself that you were just seeing things
you walk into the [[thick woods]] You scream in rage running twards the monster. Your Rage, gilt, regret,and love for Susan and how you failed to protect her, cold'nt be controlled now.
As you run towards the beast, it looks at you.
you feel the urge to turn back
[[turn back]]
you catch up to the spot where the figure is as you get closer it vanishes and there is nothing there anylonger. but you do hear lauging along one of the trails leading twards multiple camp spaces
[[walk twards the laughter]]
[[run twards the exit]]
[[go back to the beast]]You realize what you were doing was a huge mistake so stop yourself before you get too close. As you are running you hear a stomping of feet behind you
[[turn around]]You turn slightly and get a glymps of whats following you. It is the monster slowly catching up to you. You run faster and faster but not fast enough.
on the [[left]] there is a tree that you maybe able to hide behind. if you can get to it intime the beast can pass you
on the [[right]] there is a small opening into the thick woods you can slow him down in the thick foliage and escape
you manage to get behind a tree and the monster runs past it. you watch it as it runs, its paws are still drenched in blood.
you see the same [[figure]] you did before standing a good distance behind you.
there is talking on the [[trail next you you]]
You run into the woods and jump over a few thorn bushes and other plants. The beast is behind you struggleing to get past the first layer of plants. you think you are safe untill you see it rip the plants out from the ground making an opening.
you run faster but trip over a root.
[[continue]]You run towards the light at the end of the trail!
You keep running and dont look back, happy that you're soon to be free.
[[continue running]]You decide that no one wuld be hanging around in this death trap anyways and there is no use to find anyone. so you decide to take matters into your own hands.
You take out a pocket knife you've been carrying around and prepare for anything that is about to happen.
You enter the [[same spot]] where you whitnessed the beast stealing your dear susan away from you.
You walk to the figure you have gone to before. This time it stays and you can get closer. You stand directly infront of it. It stares back at you with a white depthless eyes.
Its mouth comes close to the side of your face and wispes into your ear and whispers "you shouldnt have come here, you need to leave now before it gets you too". It backs up and looks at you again. It gives a head gesture to [[follow them]].There is nothing there [[go back->left]]You struggle to get up. (Your leg is sprained) the monster catches up and stands over you it doesnt hesitate before it tries to scratch your chest, you turn as quick as you can and it ends up scratching your arm.
There is a pocket knife in your pocket.
[[pocket knife]]
[[kick it]]
[[scream]]You slide your pocket knife out of your pocket as quickly as you can.
You throw it directly at the monsters face. It starts to bleed out and runs away to care for the wound.
You are exhausted
so you [[lay there and rest]]
[[get up]]You kick the beast in the face with your good leg. It backs up to recover from the wound. You see it trying to lick the blood that is coming from its tooth. It looks at you and seems angrier than beforeYou sceamed as loud as you could. There is no one else around to hear you. The beast however takes a step back to re-foucous its self.
it seems that its hearing is to sensative to loud sounds.
[[keep screaming]]
get the [[pocket knife]] out of your pocket
You heare where the laughs are comming from a campsight and you think you can get help from the people there.
[[walk into the campsight]]You make it out of the trail and sprit twards the gift-shop
You finally get inside. But the small old man is no longer there.
[[Walk to the desk]] so you can call the police
[[go to your car]] so you can get out of thereYou go to the desk, the little man is no longer there. But there is a telephone that is fully functional.
[[call the police]]You run to your car and get in successfully. So you drive off and dont look back, ready to go home and get help. If you can.
End.You continue to screem as loud as you can. The monster starts to wimper and seems to be irritated. it backs up little by little. Then your voice gives out on you, suddenly. The beast realizes this and seems to be laughing at you
now would be a good time to bring out your [[pocket knife]]You get to the camp sight where heard the laughter. You do not see any people though. There is nothing but a tent that is ripped apart, a long past spoild meal on the bench and dried blood splatterd acros the ground. It smells tarrable. A smell of dead animals and spoiled food. The flies that are gatherd aroud the food and blood sound like a saw.
[[investagate]]
[[leave]]You decide to look around and try to find what was laughing. You look around and see multiple dark figures standing in a circle surrounding you
and start whispering "you shouldnt have come here", "you fool you saw the tape blocking you out, why didnt you listen","Now you are doomed for the same fate as your dear susan and we were", "if you leave it'll find you out there too" "fool, Fool, FOOL!" "you could have saved her"!
They all disapear at once
[[you decide to listen to them and go to the place where you heard the screams->walk closer to where you heard the screams]] You decide that this place is probebly not the best place to hide from the thing you heard. [[you leave]]You have left...
[[try to find susan]]
[[leave the park]]You walk into the campsight and you are not suprsed when there is no one there. There is a [[torn tent]], a full [[meal]] on the bench, there is a broken lantern on the floor. There is [[something]] on the edge of the woods. You follow the figure and it leads you to a camp sight. Then it dissapears.
[[walk into the campsight]] The beast is no longer there but the tap part of susnts head and her head is stll there. Your eyes fill up with tears and you start to sob. You go over to her corpse and hold your head to hers and hug her close. you continue to sob as her cold blood dranches your shirt.
[[get revenge]]
[[wait for the beast to come back to take your life too]]Susan: "Hey, we shouldnt you get out the map so we know where we are going."
[[GO BACK->leave the building]]You pick up the phone and call the police.
You explain a [[lie]] or the [[truth]] about wht happendYou explain to the Police that there was a phyco cannible who has killed Susan and tried to kill you too. You tell them that the little man who had taken you ragistration or camping never waarned you about any of this and has dissapered.
The police seem to be in disbalefe but tell you that they have sent some police men and an ambulace to come and help you.
You are relived and sit down to take in all of what you have experianced. You feel yourself teering up and start to sob.
THE ENDyou tell them what actually happened and they dont beleve you. They tell you that you are waisting their time.
...they hang up...
[[call again]]
[[give up]]You go over to the tent. There is dried blood all over the screens and floor of the tent.
[[go back->walk into the campsight]] You go to the meal left on the bench. It smells bad and looks like its been spoild for a few weeks. It is coverd in a masive amount of flies that are as loud as a saw.
[[go back->walk into the campsight]] You walk to the thing that you see off in the corner. You go closer and see that its some sort of shadow with deep white eyes staring at you.
[[reach out to it]],maybe your hallucinating.
[[ask what it is]], you really want to know.
[[walk away]] you've already made alot of bad decisions you can't make another one.You decide it's probebly best to try and find your girlfriend by now
[[walk closer to where you heard the screams]]you stat to run out of the park. You see the exit
[[run twards the exit]] You are consumed by rage and decide to take the beast head on
[[search for the monster]]You want to be with Susan and loved her so much that you can't live without her
You decide to take the same fate as she did...
and you did...You try to call again, you think maybe this time they will hear you out and help you. They pick up the call. You again explain and they say "if we help you will you stop calling".
You say yes. They say that their on their way and will be there as soon as they can. You feel relived knowing that soon you will be safe.
[[you wait]]You decide that its no use to try to convince them again so you get up and [[go to your car]]You try to touch it and your hand passes through it
it says
"Yes, I am real if thats what you're wondering"
[[ask what it is]] You ask "What are you"
The figure says "Well you dont have very good manners now do you, well I'm here to tell you that I was one of the many victams from that beast. I was attacked here along with my friends who sufferd the same fate as I. You are in grave danger and need to leave NOW"
take it's advice and [[leave the park]] You decude to walk away but it appears infront of you and wont let you leave
[[ask what it is]] You wait and wait as you sit in a safe spot constantly watching the clock. Every passing minute feels like an hour. You wait for the next 3 hours and still no one
assume their not coming [[go to your car]] and drive away
stay maybe [[they'll come]]You decide they'll come sooner or later
but they never do...You decide that you are too exhausted to get up but unfortunately you see a hungry wolf staring at you and you nolonger have your pocket knife and are unable to get up.
It runs at you and jumps at your face...
ENDYou get up and have a large pain in your leg but are able to run still despite this. You struggle but manage to get out of the woods.
[[run twards the exit]] After a few minuts of searching for it you finally come across it
[[run tword the beast]] time passes and you havent said anything to Susan
You hear a distant scream
Susan is nolonger behind you
[[run twards Susans scream]]
[[keep going and ignore the scream]]You enter the [[giftshop]].camping
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